Still learning how to make trap music in Ableton Live (only one tutorial online, which is only partially done. Ugh.); if anybody can give me some tips it would be much appreciated!
right on for the feedback yo, ayo that beat knocks homie, not my type of instrumentals but it still knocks man, maybe a nice baseline would help the beat, and some harder kicks, get some 808s in there or something to feel that bump u feel? keep the material coming man, peace.
i have to admit im not too familiar with trap so i dont know how relevant my feedback will be lol.. i liked the break at 1.26 - i would have liked it to be a little longer.. and agree that a bassline would be a nice addition to the beat..
It sounds a little plain, def a good start but i see it as being a work in progress. I am still shocked that you were able to make that beat in ableton live....good job overall though.if you have some time check out my track PICTURE PERFECT - YouTube
I like melodies you have..they go hard. However, they get repetitive, I suggest you add a couple (maybe 2-3) new instruments with different melodies. Also, the beat needs to be mixed/mastered so that the drums hit harder and try to get a harder fast attack brass layered on top of that brass. Lastly, consider adding some hihats to this. This still needs work, but has a lot of potential.