Pretty good stuff if you ask me, just a few observations about the mix.
-the little piano run that happens at about 1.34 just before those chimes kick in could be louder as it's quite impressive and deserves more focus
- the instrumentation is strong - the chimes, the choir, the keys and the string stab - and don't need to be so subjugated to the percussion in the mix; I understand this is a beat but when you have such sophisticated voices going on the drums should support the melody and harmonics not overwhelm it.
good stuff in itself, but doesn't need to hit so hard.