My First Track. Lets make the second one better
- Thread starter Ness Lee
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pMbeats
professional amateur
Your strength is your sound selection. You have a good ear for this and what sounds you have in there sound good together but you gotta work on your mix. The snare specifically is too loud.
I, personally, didn't like the long kick you used through most of the song but that's my opinion. I liked the one at 2:19 a lot better. You also gotta switch the kick up some, maybe at the end of some of the bars.
Instead of doing two kick buildups at the start, I would probably take the first one out and just use the second one. Maybe add some kicks to extend it a little if you wanted. There is also nothing that really compliments the buildup of the kicks. Consider adding some kind of transition, a buildup effect, rev crash, etc.
I, personally, didn't like the long kick you used through most of the song but that's my opinion. I liked the one at 2:19 a lot better. You also gotta switch the kick up some, maybe at the end of some of the bars.
Instead of doing two kick buildups at the start, I would probably take the first one out and just use the second one. Maybe add some kicks to extend it a little if you wanted. There is also nothing that really compliments the buildup of the kicks. Consider adding some kind of transition, a buildup effect, rev crash, etc.
CanvasMusic
New member
JGrisly
The Redskin James Dean
^^^^ I agree.
Sound selection is good.
Mix needs work.
That kick is so muddy. I can barely hear it tbh. (its gets a little better as the song goes, but not much)
The Snare tail is too long for my taste, but you know how that is..
The snare is also pretty loud and doesnt have any "crack" really.
I think also you could have gotten a little more imaginitive an arrangement with a song like this, experiment a little.
Overall, its really good, just work on that mix some more!!
You can return the feedback over here-
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-youre-used-ascent-f4f-come-get-work-466200/
Oh, and P.s- https://www.facebook.com/IAmTheSouthNessLee
He is a battle rapper as well, sells alot of beats and has an established name...
just a heads up
Sound selection is good.
Mix needs work.
That kick is so muddy. I can barely hear it tbh. (its gets a little better as the song goes, but not much)
The Snare tail is too long for my taste, but you know how that is..
The snare is also pretty loud and doesnt have any "crack" really.
I think also you could have gotten a little more imaginitive an arrangement with a song like this, experiment a little.
Overall, its really good, just work on that mix some more!!
You can return the feedback over here-
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-youre-used-ascent-f4f-come-get-work-466200/
Oh, and P.s- https://www.facebook.com/IAmTheSouthNessLee
He is a battle rapper as well, sells alot of beats and has an established name...
just a heads up
Oh, and P.s- https://www.facebook.com/IAmTheSouthNessLee
He is a battle rapper as well, sells alot of beats and has an established name...
just a heads up
Haha thanks I had no idea. I was just drinking some Nestle Chocolate Milk and made a name out of it. Now I have to find another tasty beverage to name myself after. I will make this project more creative then you should check it out. I appreciate you're help a lot.
I have to say there is potential here for sure. It was lame, it just didn't sound professional which is to be expected. As time goes on you will learn but I liked the sounds.
littled831
New member
Thought that this was pretty good for a first track, keep up the good work