Ok, this is a really dark beat xD
One thing which would made it a little better for my taste was if you gave the hihat some feel. So that not every hit is exactly the same volume.
i agree 100% with ocelot. if you gave this some far left sounding vocals (i'm thinking xxyyxx / greaf) it'd stitch together nicely. without vocals it sounds great though, so it's all just preference. good shit man.