The sound on it is good, and the instruments blend well together, but the melody is a bit too plain. Try maybe doing chord progressions that cover more time, or more complex ones, it will sound better
A good beat should keep the listener interested. Exceptional sound quality, Builds, Drum Riffs, Crashes, Bass and Melody Cange ups ect. Record companies will only listen to like the first 20 seconds of a track before they usually throw it in the trash.