if you're looking for things to change i'd scrap those hats and add a more percussive sound to that same loop. in trap the hats are what really set a groove in my opinion, and everyone uses that same hat standard. i'd try it with a maraca or guiro. it also gets kind of repetitive. i'd add more energy with faster moving parts as the verses progress
if you're just looking for opinions, it sounds pretty cool. a tad generic on the sounds, but the way you arranged them still sort of set it apart. keep making music man.