Simile's, Metaphors, Punchlines... Rhyme.

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it's all good, lame cats can get crippled
while effects ripple across the surface, i make waves
haters get played n can't map out my rhythms
while they girls leave lipstick on my dimples i don't play

so you say you can battle but ya skills 1st grade
dudes young in they britches couldn't spill with broken plates
and cups with no bottoms, b-boys that call themselves men
can get taken to school with the rest o the freshmen

invest in some henchmen you'll need the protection
from the threats that you'll face kickin dust in my direction
i was damned n i was destined, so i face alotta weight
but you both male and female so you used to turnin face

i can't understand the time that you waste tryin to face me
but i put out this response regardless guess i can relate
if you can't honor the table with a 16 out the gate
you can at least come with a flow that doesn't sound like a mistake

i thought this wasn't a battle

Slugger: yeah i know lol i wanted to go with automation cuz it rhymed better

DaveBeatz: bout to check that out right now
 
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WatchWhatHappens1204 said:
it's all good, lame cats can get crippled
while effects ripple across the surface, i make waves
haters get played n can't map out my rhythms
while they girls leave lipstick on my dimples i don't play

so you say you can battle but ya skills 1st grade
dudes young in they britches couldn't spill with broken plates
and cups with no bottoms, b-boys that call themselves men
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look at this clown dont evn hav tha balls to quote
talking bout rhythms your lyrics ar a joke
freshman ey
but ur a dropout
u copd'out
wen u herd the bman was about
im the type tht will make u shook to type
make u scared of bars u cnt evn go sleep at nite [(6:58??)]
is this a battle? well u f**king thought rong
coz either ur on the rong websyt and typing for a love song
my level? u aynt as fly
so show me what u got and f**king hit reply
 
if you can call it rappin, or speakin, or either,
both your english and your raps stink like homeless people's sneakers
i don't need any more bars here to send you to hell
so i fare thee adieu, hope thy shitty ways end well
 
I hate played-out rhymes, they start to get to me fast
Then rappers rely on pills like Eminem - just to relax
Check themselves into Rehab only quick to Relapse
While Slugger's articulating stunning phrases,
Running bases like they're victory laps

Suffice it to say I've got me some dandy hickory flows
I prefer to rephrase than repeat, but that's the way that history goes
I've got me some Robert Stacks like the "Unsolved Mysteries" host
And you can step up to the plate, but you're standing on a slippery slope
 
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The game is my *****, we equipped to elope
Ridin the waves like Max B, nigga get in the boat
Ya ship sunk, hope you niggaz could float
Its like I swallowed a key, niggaz spittin up dope
My music touch kids, my shit sick like the Pope
Wen I was young, seen a lot and I heard a lot
Then grow to the same blocks that knocked niggaz off, I heard the shots
They get envy
I'm after my green, fit finley
My advice, you be hittin the deck, u chris henry
I kno they dig me
 
no u missunderstood. nevermind maybe someone here will get this joke
 
I've got more bars than a life sentence in jail
Most rappers are wacker than pushin' a rented Aveo
Not sayin' their flows are weak, just decrepit and frail
Not sayin' I'm the best, just too epic to fail

Rappers can bring the beef that I invented for sale
I should open up a deli with all my bread and cheese -
I'll use my dough to get me some lettuce and mayo
Don't mean to take the wind to the direction you intended to sail
But it's signed, sealed and delivered like my checks in the mail
 
Check if he stale, these days, dudes have a shelf life
learn to respect life or greet death, know what it feels like?
i'm real right with the reel right cinematic action packed life
i don't run from a battle lay tactics 4 war everyday is a party see that's life

now the lil rascals needa act right before the bad news bears get the bats hype
i was that type in my past life i'm past hype n it's that trife...
... i come equipped with jewels 4 fools choose not to picture
what i'm spittin is vivid cop it on blu ray the picture
can't call it religion but i'll still smoke on the scripture
black jesus hair o sheep's wool bump it in the systems
 
mr steez still da truth .. we "armor all" for the proof
its ride or die .. an i ain tryna die .. i ratha run an shoot
i dont post much, why? too busy for dat
so all cats wit a million post, yo yall silly for dat
i make tracks not crack, wht yall sellin is dust
we only 1 year in, an yall ain ****in wit us
my key style is free style nigga get u cup
i swagga splash den surf oon wht yall bottlein up

ima stop dea
 
my flow needs no introduction
tell me why yours never seems to function,
my flow is always bumpin,
your flow aint really nothin,
my flow stay young....buckin
me and ya girl in bed....fckn
my flow like a boxer...always punchin
your flows like ya woman.. always suckin
 
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Throw it in the bag and I'll show you how I handle mine
Most of these clowns fakin' everything like they pantomime
That's why I'm nailin' all their women like it's Hammer time
Slugger 'round 30, down and dirty, on my 'Bama grind

But I keeps it cold with my Minnesota flow
All these white girls like the Minnesota snow
The rest on their knees and Minnesota blow
I like my Minnesota twins -
If you can't comprehend, you ain't in the Minnesota know
 
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enuff wit it .. homie quit it.. u embarrasin son
ya flo is midgit.. mine is civic .. im a titan to young
sum ppl dig it.. othas critic .. das da business for some
i forfiet .. cuz we was finish b4 you even begun

---------- Post added at 06:42 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:40 PM ----------

:) :) :) ... bars 4 days none prewrittin
 
I don't know who's aiming what at who, but the battle thread is elsewhere.
Just a general "For Your Information".
 
cannot be living this ignorant life/ sometimes you gotta open ya eyes/ get get shit right/ knowledge be the key/ gotta test ya might/ realize you gotta get/ get shit right/
 
dj247productions said:
cannot be living this ignorant life/ sometimes you gotta open ya eyes/ get get shit right/ knowledge be the key/ gotta test ya might/ realize you gotta get/ get shit right/
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thas a good ass hook jus wanted to say
 
This is the new king/ Yeh know its foo-king fantastic/
Its drastic how words can amaze like magic/ Flabergast and twist all the brains of the average/ Till madness grows out of their thoughts like cabbage
 
^
guys so generic, but its whatever floats ya boat
LEFT me with a weak impression...dudes like a stroke
 
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