Simile's, Metaphors, Punchlines... Rhyme.

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Ancient like knights of the round table, sitting in Armour//
deadly like what happens to a crane when it drinks//
from a pool infested with starving piranhas//
A prick like your boss in a suit acting all pompous//
If you want truth, I'm the dawg to be honest//
battling me is like Jay Z trying to battle Nostradamus//
Jay could never kill NAS so sit back n take a breather//
cuz ya corny rhymes are putting me to sleep like ether//
I'm a virus inside optic lenses so swallow and digest this//
move through your digestive system, stomach to intestines//
to enter your blood stream in order to reach ya brain//
just ta send ya ass a message//
if ya want a quick section or award winning raps, give me ten minutes//
get to clickty clackin on a keyboard n make a racket//
then to get shit clappin enter the booth and rap shit//
and that's exactly how a platinum track happens//
POOF it's magic// Like a bullet in PROOF it's tragic//
 
Even niggaz with no hands could feel this...
The game is my toilet...I Am The Feces...
 
I sit back & make love to the beat, Hip Hops Casa Nova

Your a witness to what I am on stage, No Jehovah
 
Life is full of choices so choose carefully
But life is just hopeless so I choose carelessly
Is it a fact or just an act
Why talk when you can mock
U gon light it my way
Like a microwave
 
Metaphors is the best way to rhyme. However, there is a lot of cheesy ones I hear from rappers all the time.
 
Google got me lookin up how to rob on "reddit"-Tard
I'm ****in up banks like a over due Credit Card
Don't test me you Mellow Faggot,
because it won't BEE fine when you see whats under my Black on Black "Yellow Jacket"
ROFL
 
Does anyone have any good methods of coming up with punchlines metaphors and similes I can never think of shit and when I do they sound corny as hell


money on my mind like a ******* first crush
funny how time flys that's why I'm always in a rush
treat these hoes like black jack hit em till they bust
Whenever she starts to fuss I just dick her
then get her the **** out of here quicker
than that dude at the bar that can't hold his liquor

This was just off the top of my head but see what I mean
 
Don't be so crucial

Bud Bunner said:
alot of these punchlines are too basic or too complex

my verbal skills are straight so forget these fagots <- too basic

there are others were peoples trying to do to much within a small amount of bars

just some feedback
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I've been rapping since i was young. I know what is good and what is shit. The fagot line was good, not amazing, but good. I can come up with dumb similes and metaphors like it's nothing.
Rap so sweet like cake. ***** im great like frosted flakes. All these crackas wanna be me, make yo ***** wet like a super soaker, 6ix 9ine on FeFe
 
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