Simile's, Metaphors, Punchlines... Rhyme.

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must i fear u chumps, man u could deat that/ dudes playin sleep hollow, where ya head at/
its my time to shine, like its showtime and im apollo,come on dog u follow/
just ta clear it up, i plan ahead u passive, just face it im proactive/

incredible metaphors, u could call em metafives/ instead a bitin the raw, i suggest u b a vegan/ leave the beef n ima release the beast, eat da track, then reserect it back, call this my easter beat/

i got the best buds, i dont mean weed it mean i got fresh taste, check the kicks, they both hard/the joints on my feet and the ones thats hittin/
 
If it's your time to shine,
I'm a cloud in your sky, P*ssy!
Addverb is just a bad word
Like bastard, his pastor "took him in the back", his a$$ hurts
When asked "how was that?"
He answered,"thanks sir"
Addverb sounds like a f@g nerd
And can't fly like a fat bird
With a overactive thyroid trying to fly backwards
I smack verbs around and don't clown
A pronoun had a showdown and I showed how
I'm the pro, so this bro need ta slow down
I don't give a sh*t bout ya kicks
Except to kick yo lip an' make yo sh*t split
F*ck dis prick lickin b!tch

Lol
I'm on my phone, sorry if the formatting is crazy looking.
Don't catch feelings dawg, I'm just bugging.
 
Get ya ass served, play around then i'll be quick to blast birds..
So i smack verbs, fucc an addverb, hit you backwards..
So get it straight, you lack words, make your face hit the black curb..
Till' ya gums bleedin', leave ya girl kneelin', keep the guns peelin'..
You can catch a bullet in the summer, fall, winter, everyday is gun season..

i'm bored, check out the mixtape thread, help a brother out.

"I'm on my phone, sorry if the formatting is crazy lookin"...
Dawg?!? you stealin' my lyrics again? smh @ you!
 
Ha! You took half of my tight lines, twisted 'em, and made 'em corny!! Lol.
J/k, but for real
Sike, but you did!
Lol
 
homies fa life? Ha! Only my wife is my home slice! F*ck guys!
you f*ck guys? F*ck your f*cking f@g life and go chuck rice on your wok
you duck sauce sucking gu@p! You're Asian, I'm not
you're hating my drop, cause I'm sh*tting bricks and sh*t
won ton soup with minced up shrimp, is what a Chinese pimp
would think is fit to sip and slurp up, "Aw sookie sookie"
my fortune cookie unfortunately took me, two hours to read
front to back like book ends, ran the winning numbers to my bookie
"you really shook me!" she said after nookie, how it should be
then covered my head like a hoody would! Yessir!
Woody Wood Pecker on my pecker till her neck hurts
bobble head doll gobbling and not stopping till I beg her
Like a begger n*gga bagging nagging n*gga having b*tches
fisherman fishing with my rod and catching fishes
frequent vicious visions viewed with intermission
Lyrikill is freakin freaks free, keeping all da women to myself
cause I'm selfish, I can't help it, King like Elvis when it comes to pelvic
pouncing Patty's p*ssy properly propelling pellets in her privates
like a soldier, staying up like Folgers coco beans
no homo jeans, baggy pants sagging rolled up Polo sleeves
Marco leaves, and Margaret pleas with me to "please, please her"
and mark her knees on the carpet, try her
any drier and she'd start fires, so wired with desire from I eyed her
bribed her with Access Hollywood, gave her the Insider
pretended it was detention so I stayed late
hope i ain't offend FAM, I'm jus' playing mate.

lol
 
you know its bad, when fly get mad at ya swag
and they both make plans to assassinate ya class
 
no progress when you procrastinate fast
4-wheel drive under water in quicksand, mashing the gas
slashing gashes like the lid of a can just opened, can deliver on hands
if mishandled, a sliver cut through viens, until it litters the last, drop!

lol
smh
 
lyrikill ur derprived compared to these skills, read my **** soak it in and be still/
stay in ya place like a bookmark/ still lookin for the best well you aint looked hard/ enough, u only look hard. a bluff, ya i called it/ if u all in, then u broke not ballin/
u gassed, u aint as great as u think you are/ now thats a permanent brain fart/ my ink wont pause/
im in a new frame of mind u aint got the picture yet/ i print fast i put the ink in jet/
that might be over your head, ill let it hang over/ till u catch it now your head aches for brilliance/ plain n sober/
i set the standards high/ u cant touch this/ i hammer on mc's, wit a flow to make it known im da ****/
dont moan and get pissed/ ur prone to get hit, wit bows or a fist/ dont need to load up a clip/ no toaster harnised/ but ur toast regardless/
im so fly and sick, i got the bird flu/ i bring that heat, on the track step back it might burn u/
u aint got the frame of mind, no way u could place in this race of mine/
to read these tasteless rhymes, only taintin my greatness, u a taint with no spine/
ill address it, ya off-line off-lines ull get the message, like u on-line/
just for future reference, im the essence of the future/ methods with a message thats showin that u a loser/
sessions, after sessions, only prove that im the illest/ reference to the sickness like the flu to be specific/
 
that bird flu line was dope man! I'll brb, I'm listening in on a ustream

nice drop...for a drizzle, but I'm a down pour
you're not hot, never sizzled, whatcha still around for?
addverb got subtracted, send this f@g b*tch packing
no smacking him, jus' 50 cali clapping, kickin' a$$ when attacking
half off on your casket cause I bent you in half kid
nicknamed pretzel, death toll salty, seasoned my pencil
mental poisoning, aggression progressing like boys to men
I'm poised to win, while annointing him as an honorary member
of broiled chicken dinner club, I ate 'em up, not great enough
crackhead mom when pregnant, made him dumb, I played this bum
whose claiming thug? Raining slugs and scrape this scrub who's ineffective
addverb odjects to lyrikill's primary objective, to kill insects with
intellect, and I just did!
lol
 
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Aight.. I just joined.. Ima go head n blow it up..

I'm so sick there ain't a remedy/
Scared? Yeah, you better be/
You don't want me as your enemy/
Cuz I'll make your life unlucky like you split apart the letter B/
Is that too deep? Don't hurt yourself, your head'll blow/
I've been polishin' my game, now I gotta better flow/
If you don't water your seed then it'll never grow/
I spit rhymes that got your face lookin' like the letter O/ =O
You're just another rapper that I'm better than/
Put your money on me, or don't bet again/
Emcees will need a shovel for the place that I am sendin' em/
My rhyme skills make you climb hills in the same shape as the letter M/
So may you ****in' rest in peace/
Gettin' burried by the best emcee/
You really ain't a threat to me/
Because I am everything a threat should Be../

KABOOM!

Yessir.
 
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so like a virgin its my first time
like a pro,you cant tell by my rhyme
my flow leave you baffled
searchin for words like scrabble
got more lines than college rule paper
too much swagg, more flavor than now and laters
truestarr on my green like chlorophyl
stay fresh like ziploc with the double seal

feedback plz...my first time showin my lyrical abilities to the world. :)
thanx,
Truestarr♥

MUZiK iS LiFE.
GOD iS THE CONDUCTOR.
 
You could say i come with benefits
and yo boyfriend is a misfit
and me and you girl we sync
yo relationship is the titanic
and its gone sink
so you need think
and modify
do you want to date Biff?
or marty mcfly?
cause i would go back to the future
back in time
so i can be the first
to make you mine
but her mind got caught up
in a continuum
now he just a remember him

luvvy dubby mood
 
CC

Got stacks miles high, got the cheddar like Cabot
Four-leaf clover luck, or the foot of a Rabbit
You trying to act hard, well I aint gonna have it
Cuz Ill just step on stage and blow you up like a Maverick
All you got is a pistol and I bet it jams like traffic
And I score more points with the ******* than the Magic
 
my flows are detatchable
smoke two side of your brain
with a cotton flannel
steam birds out the kettle
from a double barrel
change the channel
if you think my flows are random
like sprayin a machine gun
at pedestrians wit a tantrum
hold the smile wit a passion
i see things in beyond sight
you wouldnt recognise like
sitting in your room
watchin B-E-T all night
so break the hype and relax
wit a book to calm your nerve
coco cola wouldnt do
cause the sound is true
im playin
but you get the idea of a nerd
who sits tight wit a verb
and blaims kurds and lurks
behind his friend's mum's bedroom
wishin for a peek and leak before he flees
like abraham lincoln ran from the police

jus some **** i was thinkin at uni today
 
droppin detachable flows like planetary
lyk weezy im the ish, last name unsanitary
you flappin ya gums, is that really necessary
bet all that cease when u see the guns i carry
not physically but mentally
mess wit me ther is a penalty
got goons,goblins and beast in my family
u will never cross the line, they wont abandon me
speakin of lines, i drop all the time
like --- to ___ hope u caught those signs
wen me nd my gurls come thru,call it the march of dimes
now im signin off, hope u liked my rhymes.

wat u think...thats off the dome. if i say so myself, it was nice. lol
 
only 15
took the rap game ransom//
they cheer for my bars, call me ted danson//
gotta vision call me richard branson
:)
 
i go by..

Chuck Edwards there is none better
i'll have you sweating like its summer and youre wearing a sweater
so i put on a tanktop that means i met the weather
i dont care if you make it rain, i like the sunshine better
oh are you embarrassed? your face couldnt be redder
well i apologize as if i were Ryan Tedder
I hear you squakin that youre fly but i see no feathers
I should chill with DJ Drama the way Im a trendsetter
and yes im the brains of this master plan
Im chasin after my dreams running as fast as I can
I live in the country of the great Uncle Sam
and I got the whole world in the palm of my hand
and i can and i will be the one you cant stand
with a flow that controls and takes over command
so applaud and then stand and just clap your damn hands
hit me back if you want to get at it again
 
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