Simile's, Metaphors, Punchlines... Rhyme.

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Like superman and steel , I'll make your fuc'n mind bend/...
if you aint down to steal, paul wall pretend/ sit over to the side then.
 
She mad jaded when she spit my name./
I got these ******* married to the Dick like Jane./
 
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you a fag that search for penis, and your verse is henious
whilst i got the tightest delivery since the birth of jesus
cos with words im genius...
 
With this strike i swing at you, comes in at the
force to leave another cat nogginless like the sphinx statue
 
buD-butter-butt-buN-bumper/ your name is Bud Bunner?/ come on , we all know your first name is Gunther/ middle the little anal astronaut pillow bitin' muther *ucker/ last that's any fags favorite pelvis thruster/ the SECOND, so don't take me for no buster , call me the rhyme adjuster/ WrikWREK the rhyme and beat constructor...
 
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buD-butter-butt-buN-bumper/ your name is Bud Bunner?/ come on , we all know your first name is Gunther/ middle the little anal astronaut pillow bitin' muther *ucker/ last that's any fags favorite pelvis thruster/ the SECOND, so don't take me for no buster , call me the rhyme adjuster/ WrikWREK the rhyme and beat constructor...
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killa cam would have written that first line.... and lets try not target battle bars at anyone since thats not the aim of this thread.
anyway...

I got the jaggedest blade bro, you faggots can stay low
breys know i split u down the middle like a jacket potatoe//
 
im hearing parallels in parables from cities seas apart,
accents accentuate a difference in mindstate,
the clock reads 3, the witching hour commences,
bob marley in a bag enhance my senses...

not really battle material, but i had to let that one out!

now a battle flow...

U think ur flows electic & off the beaten track,
u bring to mind bobby b, b!tch, u aint got jack,
you live out of your whip and aint got no change,
unless ur down on ur knees, tasting candy rain!

i kno bobby brown didnt sing candy rain, but hey who gives a f**k
 
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I can only think what kind of writers they've got to be/
If they still don't know when to use an apostrophe/
 
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haha...

i punch-line like a simile, you can't compare me though
dude with more soul, then a shoes interior
 
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my mission on this earth, vanilla skys and analogies,
Top me im desert, milky way me out my galaxy,
 
haha killa cam? wtf

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killa cam would have written that first line.... and lets try not target battle bars at anyone since thats not the aim of this thread.
anyway...

I got the jaggedest blade bro, you faggots can stay low
breys know i split u down the middle like a jacket potatoe//
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what? ! haha i made all that up like in 10 minutes ! lol
show me what song MY first line was in so i can hear it...

and as for the target of this thread ... i started it , so stfu


punchlines and similes, needles and threads/
like starring into the sun you squint cuz you cant comprehend/

but like Arabian quickie mart owner once said , "this isn't a library buddie friend"/ so im closing your book for a early end.
 
commited to a hopital in a dog foam trance/
from taking happy pills doing the jitterbug dance/


hhaaaaaa u like that dontcha
 
'what? ! haha i made all that up like in 10 minutes ! lol
show me what song MY first line was in so i can hear it...

and as for the target of this thread ... i started it , so stfu'

that took you ten minutes to write.... lol. the line is not actually used in his songs i was saying its the kinda bullsh1t cam would write, if you want to make a battle thread then make one, the target of this thread was clearly not to battle each other.
anyway...

this the kinda sh1te we might see from a hyped teen
my b1tch slap cup both dey cheeks like some tight jeans//



-edit - damn censor :D
 
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I spit strong words swiftly spoken,
You came in good health, yet you left me broken,
My style has an approach that’s tongue in cheek,
Coz it’s a joke when I leave your tongue between your teeth,
 
Your out-of-shapeness is jigglin like jell-o/
Gelatinous beasts absorbin you nasty fellows/
Take you to the gallows, the headsman says hello/
"How would you like it today?", you say "Like hell bro"/
Slap him across the face with the back of your fist/
And snack on his wrist cause you was lackin the list/
Of DNA strands needed for your own sustenence/
You count dracu-wack and you hopped up on some substances.

Oh well, I didn't really do many metaphors or similes, but I tried!

-E.T.
 
then u drop somethin brah. I know me and at least 4 other cats that have posted in this thread could probably murder you lyrically.

Try any of us
Bravery Pandemic
Et Science
Nattwalls
Law1988
Gutty502
 
slim...look at yourself in the mirror. then re-evuluate what you doing. you cant see me lyriclly but this is the internet who raps over the internet. and besides....my **** is real. what type of work have u possibly put in on the streets? this is y hiphop is dead.

dog i just listen to your myspace. this **** is 2 funny. damn man everybody wanna be a ****ing gangster. if u lived 1 week in my neighborhood you be crying like **** lil slim.

iliveit....urapit

www.myspace.com/youngidc

dont let the computer fool u champ
 
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uhh, okay my myspace page is mainly for an artist i produce for. My style is way different. And dont claim how hard your streets are dude. I live in the metro in louisville, ky we have some ruff streets dude. And rappin on the internet still can show ur verbal skills, so keep it movin homie
 
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