Short Experimental Track [F4F]

[Luminosity]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IfD0AT5vXOg&list=UUytl0Zx5qCTkMNi8i3GNDBw&index=2

Hey, I'm 16 and have been producing for around a year and a half. Recently made this because I don't like the boundaries rap instrumentals have (what I was doing before).

Anyway I've never really attempted a track like this before so feedback would be much appreciated.

Mixing was done quickly because it's not really what I was trying to showcase.

Also the piano is a VST, I tried to make it as life like as possible but obviously if it was a more serious attempt I would record with an actual piano.

Will return your feedback in 24 hours!

Thanks again - L.

 

[By-Tor]

I really like this, it's very eerie, reminds me of Aphex Twin's more ambient stuff. The piano dynamics were just great! I'd like to hear more of this.

 

[johnerl]

This is ominous as hell and I really like it. The piano is super dope

 

[pgathriller]

Experimenting with new sounds/styles is a great thing.

I think this shit is dope -- could easily be used an interlude or intro track more conventionally too

That sliding synth that comes in around 1:10 is awesome; super into it. This is quality stuff right here man, I'm diggin it

Hit me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-ive-made-about-9-months-474232/#post49781386

 

[blackroyalty]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IfD0AT5vXOg&list=UUytl0Zx5qCTkMNi8i3GNDBw&index=2

Hey, I'm 16 and have been producing for around a year and a half. Recently made this because I don't like the boundaries rap instrumentals have (what I was doing before).

Anyway I've never really attempted a track like this before so feedback would be much appreciated.

Mixing was done quickly because it's not really what I was trying to showcase.

Also the piano is a VST, I tried to make it as life like as possible but obviously if it was a more serious attempt I would record with an actual piano.

Will return your feedback in 24 hours!

Thanks again - L.

Wow! Very interesting and unheard of! I'd need to get accustomed to this to hear it more often, though it's nice with the lugubrious and gloomy vibe with the synth at the end too.

**Return the favor by dropping a review on my song?**
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmu...ting-like-demo

 

[Luminosity]

Thanks a lot man, appreciated.

 

[Oriax]

This is pretty good man. You've managed to get some feeling into this piece of music. The piano is great. Did you compose the melodies yourself? The vocal sample at the end is great also. Good job on this man.

I'm also into experimental stuff, check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...than-satans-dick]-[feedback-returned]-474177/

 

[Nolascko.]

Biblical piano sound and vocal sample reminding me of some kind of Datsik track or something. Very nice, if you like the experiment and everything it brings check out my cloudsound, I think you'll appreciate

Nolascko

 

[Luminosity]

This is ominous as hell and I really like it. The piano is super dope

Thanks man, seeing as it's a VST i'm happy it sounded okay!

 

[Luminosity]

Experimenting with new sounds/styles is a great thing.

I think this shit is dope -- could easily be used an interlude or intro track more conventionally too

That sliding synth that comes in around 1:10 is awesome; super into it. This is quality stuff right here man, I'm diggin it

Hit me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-ive-made-about-9-months-474232/#post49781386

Returned feed man, nice track.

 

[Luminosity]

Experimenting with new sounds/styles is a great thing.

I think this shit is dope -- could easily be used an interlude or intro track more conventionally too

That sliding synth that comes in around 1:10 is awesome; super into it. This is quality stuff right here man, I'm diggin it

Hit me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-ive-made-about-9-months-474232/#post49781386

Returned feed man, nice track.

 

[Luminosity]

Wow! Very interesting and unheard of! I'd need to get accustomed to this to hear it more often, though it's nice with the lugubrious and gloomy vibe with the synth at the end too.

**Return the favor by dropping a review on my song?**
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmu...ting-like-demo

Returned the feed dude! Thank you very much.

Will do the rest of the feedback ASAP, thanks so far.

 

[Luminosity]

This is pretty good man. You've managed to get some feeling into this piece of music. The piano is great. Did you compose the melodies yourself? The vocal sample at the end is great also. Good job on this man.

I'm also into experimental stuff, check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...than-satans-dick]-[feedback-returned]-474177/

Yeah everything in the piece was composed by me, nothing was sampled. Thank you very much, feedback has been returned!

 

[foresonic]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IfD0AT5vXOg&list=UUytl0Zx5qCTkMNi8i3GNDBw&index=2

Hey, I'm 16 and have been producing for around a year and a half. Recently made this because I don't like the boundaries rap instrumentals have (what I was doing before).

Anyway I've never really attempted a track like this before so feedback would be much appreciated.

Mixing was done quickly because it's not really what I was trying to showcase.

Also the piano is a VST, I tried to make it as life like as possible but obviously if it was a more serious attempt I would record with an actual piano.

Will return your feedback in 24 hours!

Thanks again - L.

The piano is great, man! This track definitely has a creepy vibe, but I love it!

 

[blindkid11]

I like the melody of the piano it's always good to try out new shit, You shoulda experimented with some drums and percussion over this though dope sample though i agree with what that one guy said about it being a intermission track or intro, i'd love to hear some of your other work. Keep it up though and check this:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...fe-sampledd-instrumental-free-d-l-new-474381/

 

[barbarian_dros]

It's really cool, if a dusty drumloop was dropped over it it'd work well i reckon(after you set it up with that big intro).

 

[Luminosity]

It's really cool, if a dusty drumloop was dropped over it it'd work well i reckon(after you set it up with that big intro).

Thanks man!

 

[goodflo]

Pretty interesting track, really interesting, as mentioned before, it reminds me of Aphex Twin.
I like the melodies, the piano sounds pretty solid to me.
It kind of resembles me some sort of movie soundtrack Lewis

Great job!

Radovan

 

[pMbeats]

I like the concept man, throw some drums on it and it could be nasty. I'd love to hear this again if you go that route.


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[tanelsepp]

Hey man wouldn't worry about the piano sound, sounds great for a vst, and you made it sound natural nice job with that. Really eerie vibe, definitely unique and dope. You gotta good ear for it!

If you find a moment, let me know what you think of my latest https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ck/1st-remix-borgeous-invincible-trap-475472/