Nice flow bro, I feel what your saying, I feel like my mind is too much for the general population as well, and I don't lie either. I like the Kendrick Lamar style hook, you're a good artist dude keep it up, and all I can suggest is to use more punch lines, damn, right when I said that I heard "while I walk on the sky like Anakin" - I used that in Skywalker on my mixtape great minds think alike huh?
This is a lot better than what I expected when I clicked on this thread. Your flow and lyrics are consistent and on point. The instrumental reminded me of some of Eminem's old music at the beginning and was dope from beginning to end. I also liked the outro. Probably gonna follow you on soundcloud so I can listen to this again today.