the only things i like about this crap is the saw bass sound and the fact that i filled out 1:30.
i hate everything about what i made here, but where can i get started with?
Adding in percussive elements like hi-hats, shakers, bells, whatever else, will really help it groove a lot more. I think it sounds pretty good for the 2nd song you've made. One of the more common mistakes that I've heard beginning producers make is that they don't pay attention to the subtleties in their drums and percussions (patterns, instrumentation, and sound quality)
This song get get freaked somethin serious.
For your second song its solid.
Experiment with counter melodies to the saw, dont be afraid to do weird sh!t...
Start adding cymbals, play with some delay in certain areas.
You've got this, youre gonna be making sick music in no time
This is actually something I would use for a guitar warm up session