this doesn't work as there is no such artist or track
if you just drop your link inside the tags the editor sometimes inserts a tag around the link and produces t...undcloud.com/your-artist-name/your-track-name[/soundcloud][/PLAIN]
you can fix this in the wysiwyg editor by selecting/highlighting the link and clicking on the unlink icon in the editor bar (the world with the red cross at the bottom right of it)
Nice man. I get what you're doing with the 90's feel and it sounds pretty good. I think the drums could have a little more character (particularly the snare), it would help make the song sound a little more unique and stand out. The drums just seem a little generic sounding in some ways. Regardless, I think it sounds pretty tight and the vocals are quality.