He man, thanks for your feed on my track.
Nice track here! Unique style. One thing I have to say about your mix is that sometimes the high of the vocal is too harsh, maybe u put too much high shelf/exciter on it? Try to fix that on your next track and it would be awesome.
Maybe a little bit more reverb and delay would give the track a bit more vibe to it and put the vocal and the rest of the instruments more as one.
But overall nice! Keep it up.