J Cole - Lights Please (Remix) - Listen and critic please ! =)

This is awesome bro! Love the piano and the chord progressions and the strings goin on in the chorus! solid track homie!
 
- Nice intro! Did you play that on your own? (Before the sample comes in)
- The sample is dope -- reminds me of something that Kanye would use
- The snare is dope
- The kick really "ruins" the track for me! It's so hollow and doesn't hit like its suppose to! I think if your kick had more beef -- it would take the beat to the next level
- The switch up in the hook is dope

Work on that kick drum!!!!!!!! Keep it up

Please return the favour:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ue-prize-produced-kao-benny-liang-f4f-468698/

Thanks!
 
I think you did really good, it sounds amazing. Except for the kick, I would say, the same as the other guy said. Otherwise it's awesome
 
Sup guys, i really preciate the feedbacks here!

I will definatly take a look on the kick drum!

As far as the acapella, i got it from just googling it.

I did not play the intro myself no, thats sampled.

The voice is sampled from Erykah Badu
 
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Thanks for all the positive critics!

I've went in and "beefed" my kick up a notch!


added some EQ, added some sub, and finally compressed it

Now i cannot change my file on sound cloud so I've put up a video on youtube!

 
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