"Your Liiiiies" and "Oh Lord" vocal in the intro would have been a good addition to add to the chops. Not sure if a snare is a better choice over a thick snare for this track. Remember simple chops are like cajun cooking. Peaople think it is a lot of stuff in cajun food but there is only four main ingredients in every cajun dish (not as much as everyone thinks). Keep your chops simple. Overall a great idea but, can use a few tweaks to set it off.