sounds alright just the mixing on some of those synths feels "cheap" maybe its the sample choice, not sure.
thats mostly at the start and the arp synths that they sound "cheap" maybe just work on that mixing alil bit or choose very similar synths that dont sound so stock.
the watermark comes in way too often aswell, i get ur tryin to sell beats but it is distracting as often as it comes in
still im feelin the idea behind this though. just some small things stood out to me.