feedback on my vocals

[Deck$ter]

im 16 and have been recording for 1 month,I recorded this with an at2020 usb mic in my untreated bedroom with audacity.
this just a rap i jotted down to test the mic so dont expect a masterpice of a rap(lol)

reverb nation.com / dexterofficial
i cant do links yet so copy/paste(and take out spaces)

the effects I used where:

main vocals: eq, panned to the right 10
dub(main vocals rapped again word for word)anned to left 20.
adlib1= panned 20 to the let,eq,compression(3:1 ratio,-17 threshold), and delay
adlib2=same as adlib1 except panned 20 to the right.


wanted to know if there was anything i could do to make this better
with the exception of improving my actual rapping i know i need to work on that.

or is this as good as vocal quality gets with my setup??

 

[Over Dose]

there's no music on the page

 

[Deck$ter]

my fault, its up there now

 

[OnceMe]

you should add beat to see is it fittin or not... acapella's usually use for dj mixing

 

[Deck$ter]

alright i added the beat its the once called drop the world freestyle

 

[Over Dose]

You don't have any energy. It sounds like you're half asleep. Work on your performance, no matter how good a mix engineer is, he can't make a bad rap performance sound good.

 

[OnceMe]

Listening lil wayne? i've been listening this song right now when i saw this post.. its so hilarious
But Eminem is better performer

 

[Deck$ter]

Haha, high school days lol my generation of rappers already was on xxl freshman list(lol)