Fade to Black- Rap F4F

[donny7337]

Random rap from me and a couple friends. Tell me what you think and I'll return the feed.

https://soundcloud.com/donato-beats/donato-x-steve-the-second-x

 

[kfxkicks]

Like the samples.
Your style works but the lyrics are just whatever.
The mix of everything needs a complete over haul and that hook needs some work.
Otherwise idea is good just needs to be refined. Keep it up.

Feed me back - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...d-type-beat-black-diamonds-[f4f-100%]-457765/

 

[donny7337]

Like the samples.
Your style works but the lyrics are just whatever.
The mix of everything needs a complete over haul and that hook needs some work.
Otherwise idea is good just needs to be refined. Keep it up.

Feed me back - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...d-type-beat-black-diamonds-[f4f-100%]-457765/

thanks for the feed, ill work on the mix

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bumping

 

[l1l]

Yea the mix needs some work trust me with better mixing skills on vocals it will sound better...beat was on point.........Also i do agree on the lyrics just try and practice some on them

Check me out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-sean-type-beat-rest-f4f-457863/#post49699804

 

[donny7337]

Yea the mix needs some work trust me with better mixing skills on vocals it will sound better...beat was on point.........Also i do agree on the lyrics just try and practice some on them

Check me out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-sean-type-beat-rest-f4f-457863/#post49699804

thanks for the feed

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bumping

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any more feed?

 

[the essentialz]

its cool i really like the beat.... the rappin I'm not real big fan of but keep grinding
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-let-me-know-what-ya-think-f4f-always-457783/

 

[donny7337]

thanks man

 

[Kal X]

Interesting beat I like it. The hook sounds a little off with the instruments though. You guys all sound like you're reading the lyrics off a page. The flow ideas are good imo, but the delivery is poor, work on that with the mix and I think you could have a decent beat. Keep it up. Check me out when you get a chance: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...mental-hip-hop-feed4feed-457879/#post49699891

 

[donny7337]

Interesting beat I like it. The hook sounds a little off with the instruments though. You guys all sound like you're reading the lyrics off a page. The flow ideas are good imo, but the delivery is poor, work on that with the mix and I think you could have a decent beat. Keep it up. Check me out when you get a chance: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...mental-hip-hop-feed4feed-457879/#post49699891

thanks for the feed man we'll work on it

 

[officialdh]

i agree with everyone else, the beat is dope. the mix needs some work but the overall song is not bad at all.
return feed: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ack/bikini-california-dedication-song-457884/

 

[donny7337]

i agree with everyone else, the beat is dope. the mix needs some work but the overall song is not bad at all.
return feed: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ack/bikini-california-dedication-song-457884/

thanks man

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bumping

 

[COfactor]

Nice track. Really diggin the beat and the concept of the song. My critique is to have the track mixed and mastered better. Keep it up!

Return the Feed: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...als-trap-remix-will-return-feedback-456303/2/

 

[donny7337]

Nice track. Really diggin the beat and the concept of the song. My critique is to have the track mixed and mastered better. Keep it up!

Return the Feed: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...als-trap-remix-will-return-feedback-456303/2/

thanks for the feed

 

[lord leshy]

dope beat keep it up! id play with mixing in the vocals a bit.

 

[donny7337]

dope beat keep it up! id play with mixing in the vocals a bit.

Thanks for the feed

 

[NeimanTyler]

beats cool...i like the verse more than the chorus...turn up the drums...keep grinding

return feedback here
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...able*-prod-@neimantyler-100%-feedback-457939/

 

[donny7337]

beats cool...i like the verse more than the chorus...turn up the drums...keep grinding

return feedback here
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...able*-prod-@neimantyler-100%-feedback-457939/

Thanks man