Yea the melody is sampled. I was thinking that earlier too.I presume this is made using samples from another track, if yes then you have good ears because those samples in that order make a really nice noise, just something about the kick, which I guess you added?, anyway it seems a little loud compared to the other parts of the track so maybe level that out if possible?
Why are you lost?I'm a little lost composition wise, but I really like how you ordered the samples.
Thanks everyone that offered their suggestions, I redid the arrangement, mix, master. Can everyone give it one more listen please?
https://soundcloud.com/nipharu/dawn-1
Updated the link in the OP as well thanks everyone