Critique needed (F4F)

[Nipharu]

Thanks everyone for their help on my other tracks, I made a new one last night and would like some feedback on it. Of course feedback will be returned so feel free to drop those links.

Updated link:

 

[Jordy Beckers]

Snare lacks power, but sounds fresh overall. Maybe change up the drum pattern every now and then?. Pretty cool overall.

 

[aplah]

I presume this is made using samples from another track, if yes then you have good ears because those samples in that order make a really nice noise, just something about the kick, which I guess you added?, anyway it seems a little loud compared to the other parts of the track so maybe level that out if possible?

https://soundcloud.com/aplah/aplah-recall

 

[raphseason]

I'm a little lost composition wise, but I really like how you ordered the samples.

 

[Nipharu]

I presume this is made using samples from another track, if yes then you have good ears because those samples in that order make a really nice noise, just something about the kick, which I guess you added?, anyway it seems a little loud compared to the other parts of the track so maybe level that out if possible?

Yea the melody is sampled. I was thinking that earlier too.

I'm a little lost composition wise, but I really like how you ordered the samples.

Why are you lost?

 

[Ametrine]

It's got a chill vibe to it. I actually do like the melody on it. Personally, though, I think there's a touch too much sidechain dragging the beat in and out. That intro is really sick and smooth, but the kick kind of drowns the rest of the track. I like it overall though man.

Mind giving me a listen?: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...dback/aurora-progressive-trap-i-think-474550/

 

[molotovrain]

nice sample! but a little one dimensional. but im digging it tho! good work

 

[klzbeats13]

I enjoyedthe beat! Very nice samples. The 2nd kick drowns out a lot of the melody. I'm not too sure how I would improve this besides maybe adding a different drum line near the middle to add something different for the listener. But that all depends on where you want to take this beat!

Please leave feedback here! Thanks

 

[Nipharu]

Thanks everyone that offered their suggestions, I redid the arrangement, mix, master. Can everyone give it one more listen please?
https://soundcloud.com/nipharu/dawn-1

Updated the link in the OP as well thanks everyone

 

[shine11]

Thanks everyone that offered their suggestions, I redid the arrangement, mix, master. Can everyone give it one more listen please?
https://soundcloud.com/nipharu/dawn-1

Updated the link in the OP as well thanks everyone

yea i like the updated vers..diggin it

 

[YOVENEK]

hey nipharu ,nice beats ,i liked U.F.O
for "dawn" i think it's good but you could have had more groove on the bass , by playin it maybe less "on" the beat and more in between the mesures .. (don't know if your working with an mpc but you can play that bass on 16level and find a nice bassline)

 

[OceanJams]

really nice beat, i like the sample you use a lot, i feel like some supplementary percussion would take this track to the next level though i.e. cymbals, snaps and some layering on the drums to make it really stand out. Nice beat man!

F4F https://soundcloud.com/james-cano-2/dutch-masters-oceanjams

 

[Vinsane23]

The way it came in was gold ! when it dropped it kinda thru me off but good work none the less.. the mix seems to be a lil too low but maybe you didnt master it.. This is nice work man no complaints other than it being so low in volume ! keep it up

Plz return here - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/f4f*-darkness-falls-*new-473930/

 

[DopeSoundBrothers]

Sample is good, but drums are weak. Or at least snare needs some pumping.


You can check my lastest online creation here. Thanks.

 

[G.I.G Productions]

Good job!

 

[RJOnThaTrack]

I love this sample! good work.

 

[namesi]

The melody is great, but the snare definitely lacks something as others were saying. Change up the drum sequencing a bit throughout the joint and you have a great beat! Keep it up!

If you wouldn't mind checking me out: Hip Hop Sampled Track [Feed For Feed like Always]

 

[30secondbeats]

Dawn


You combined the string/horn sample with the vocals nicely! Very laid-back party feel.
The drums are slightly overpowering the sample, which I think, in this case, should be the other way around. Mixing is always very subjective, but generally speaking, you could compress the track some more to glue things together.