The idea of the beats good but you need to make the deeper parts of the bass stand out more by boosting around 30-50 hz and putting a low filter on it with a cutoff of 150-225hz then throw on a compressor boost it by like 4.5-6 DB with a ratio of about 2.5-4.0 then set the threshold to like -15-(-25) db and spend some more hours on the mix bro the kicks could hit a hell of alot harder but it just takes practice i promise you just need to work on kinda mixing up the main synth and cut out instruments from time to time and the drums to make it interesting also add little subtle
effects or samples, you always want to have some element of the beat changing from time to time to avoid it getting repetitive. It's good keep working at it.
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