Clean or nah? F4F

Shorten up that intro, you've only got a little time to hook people in. If i wasn't trying to get feedback i would have switched it off before it got into the main part. The bass drum hits were tight, The whole thing felt a little empty but if you were going for a minimalist beat i guess that would work as one, with vocals it might just balance it out. Interesting listen, the whole thing felt very *squeaky clean" and professional sounding. I don't think the melody was corny but just needed a little twist to make it interesting (perhaps a instrument coming in every now and then to make it feel a little dark).

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