I feel like maybe at the drop there should be a different synth to mix it up a bit. Also im just looking for more to be going on. No hate at all but this kinda sounds like a loop from a videogame load screen or something. I just feel like there needs to be more to keep interest. Keep pushing man! check me out!
Definitely some cool stuff going on and I'm loving some of the sound choices. I think it might benefit from the drums being more centered, it was throwing me off for a little bit until my ears adjusted. Most dance type tracks have centered drums since they're supplying the groove you know? Overall, I loved the sound but it was a little repetitive without a main melody or hook coming in and out. I think if there was a vocalist on top this could sound really nice. I don't know if that's your plan or not, but I hope you consider it b/c it could be pretty dope!
I agree with the funk junkies opinion. Since it is dance music, drum beat could be more centered. If you use protools or something else to mix then try Center effect. Overall it has some good vibe, but I don't think it shows its 100% yet. Try to mixing it with comparing other soundtrack that u like. Good work.
the song idea is great, but take care of your mixdown and mastering ... it seems to be a bit muddy in my opinion and on my old stereo speakers ! try to add some percussions etc. for getting more variety into it !