Four seconds in, I immediately imagined Ghostface was ramblin' with the song as it comes in. With this rhythm when the beats [the numbers are the down beats]
"YAO. Ghost 1flexin' at the 2bodega. [3] Stretched 4paper. Rolex1, I'm no 2stranger. Bangers 3under the van [4] seat. 1Jake know I 2had heat, 3blast it make the 4whole street melt. [1] Like don't 2make me take 3off my belt [4]. Champi1ons. Hand 2standin' at the 3podium. It's 4Tony with the 1casserole. 2Goalie mask, 3basket Casey 4Jones." And so on, and so forth.
I personally would layer the snare with a slapper just 'cause that's how I'd like it, but your snare works. Or you know what, layer it with another rim shot, one with more mid. Ew I think I want to rap to this. You;d be my friend forever if you sent this thru to my website domain at gmail. Or whatever. Great job, my man.
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