Trap style beat! (F4F)

[randy7027]

Been working on something new, it's not entirely mixed yet but feedback would be nice on this work in progress. Will return the favor!

https://soundcloud.com/randy7027/trap-beat-sample

 

[kdanger]

the composition is really nice here man but the drums seems like they are too quiet or panned way out or something. I feel like they need to be layered more... actually the drums all around need more layers ad to be louder I think. keep it up the effect work you are doing on the drums is cool but be sure not to over do it. keep it up!!
check me out!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rap-dirty-south-etc/lets-keep-rolling-501504/

 

[djnino]

Sounds very unmastered bro, but if mastered this would be great!

 

[Bennbeats]

I totally agree with kdanger. Composition is awesome! Really nice beat.. But the perc stuff is super loud and the rest of the drums are not.. Its just a mixing thing because the rest of the beat sounds great!

Keep it up man! And check me out if you can.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...w-game-documentary-pt-2-type-beat-f4f-501697/

 

[randy7027]

I appreciate it guys! yeah I haven't gotten to put this track through my monitors yet to REALLY get down to mixing but once I do hopefully it will come out cleaner.

 

[tomkillsjerry]

cool idea mix just needs a little love sounds like its missing something
anyway heres mine
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ck-trap-banger-false-idol-feed-4-feed-501743/

 

[nightlife206]

cool track, i like the melodies, not really a fan of filtering and the drums sound low quality need to be mixed better or use better samples

let me know what you think https://www.futureproducers.com/for...p-trap-dirty-south-etc/other-face-f4f-501367/

 

[Gnasty Music]

Oooh I would throw some horns and some deep mid-bass over that, and thats a wrap lol... check me out https://www.futureproducers.com/for...new-instrumental-feedback-appreciated-501745/

 

[Zacobe]

Umm, it's pretty much all over the place.. you should REALLY practice using a reference song when producing so you can get a good idea of how loud certain sounds should be in a mix. I applaud you for completing music and putting forth the effort to get feedback, but you have a LOT of work to do my friend.

check out my latest: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/check-out-my-new-beat-remix-contest-501695/

 

[DJ Straxger]

Melody is dope I just don't like the drums at all. I also think the clap should be more consistent throughout the beat. Melody is real nice though and that's where I struggle when it comes to trap beats. To me the beat comes off like it's not yet finished.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ur-light-shine-dj-straxger-star-l-f4f-501206/

 

[RahBeats]

Just listened in I like the drop though I feel your sound selection needs to improve as well as your arrangement of the track. Keep at it homie!
Check me here https://soundcloud.com/rahmodo/cant-stop-prod-by-rah

 

[BigK]

That track is really original man I'm likin that your only problem is your mixing and mastering spend some more time on that and you'll be set. I don't know what you were going for but it sounds like its missing a bit on the low end if you popped a few 808s in there it would sound blessed
Check out my new track if you like peace! https://soundcloud.com/bigkbeatsallday/runnin-big-k

 

[Finnis Music]

nice track...I like to hear different varieties of trap. I'm actually catching up right now and giving the trap scene a shot...

Please Provide HONEST Feedback - 1st Attempt @ Mixing My Own Instrumentals

 

[itsPnuthoe]

I dig it. A little more tuning and you'll be good. Just do whatever is your style and whatever you like even if people don't get it.

check me out if you got time https://soundcloud.com/itspnuthoe/boatmobile

 

[randy7027]

Alright all feedback has been given to the ones that haven't yet received it! I apologize for being a bit late but I got it!

 

[BigEarsMixes]

Composition is good. But like others have already said you need to work on the mix. I understand that you haven't mixed it yet, so it's a little difficult to crit. that.

looking forward to hear your next project with a better mix.

check out my latest work and let me know what you think!

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ore-after-808-drum-kit-f4f-502367/?highlight=

 

[inFormal_aJ]

Melody is good but this one definitely lacks energy. Feels so down. Try to build up the energy in the track. Then it would be good. Also, the metronome kinda snare is pretty bad. Try to remove that

Hey check mine while you can

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...tc/informal-aj-my-third-official-song-502446/

 

[Section Dot 007]

There's definitely a good idea for a beat hear. Right now lack of drum mixing is holding it back. I think more mid in the kick, another snare stacked for the twos and fours, and overall balance using a reference track as others suggested is a good place to start. Good start though, keep it up.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/barack-obama-spitting-freestyle-f4f-502476/

 

[raven free rap beats]

Very nice composition!