Hey man, this isn't my style either but I'll do my best:
What I liked:
Even though this isnt my style, it's something I'd happily put in a playlist and listen to several times, it reminds me of bonobo in ways, and i love bonobo
the track is very immersive, excellent use of stereo to create such a 3D sounding track, which is an art i appreciate especially because I find that so hard to achieve
Your bassy lead for the want of a better phrase that starts at around 1:14. I know this may seem obvious because it's a key aspect to the track, but it fits in so goddamn well and just adds to that immersive feel
What I feel could be improved:
Obviously im only saying this because im trying to have a critical eye to help you out, I guess nothing really jumps out at me on the higher frequencies, I feel the hat could ring through more, maybe providing some more sibilance for it? Other than that I was going to mention the mastering (which would probably solve the above comment) but by the title it seems you have that in mind, and for an unmastered track this seems very promising. Im going to throw you a follow so I can check that out later on
All in all a very enjoyable listen!
If you could chuck some feedback back my way I'd appreciate it man, my link is here:
Danny Darko - Hurricane Remix