Who Shot Ya Free Verse *F4F*

[One Stop Hip Hop]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fa12kcuwpJQ&feature=youtu.be

let me know if u like it, drop links and I got you

 

[Stanzah]

Not bad, First thing i noticed was that Kansas city line, had way too many syllables crammed in. This happens in some of your other lines and it makes your bars sound more like spoken word rather than flow. Hope this makes sense, Keep at it.

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[One Stop Hip Hop]

thanks homie!

 

[Donta Black]

Reppin for the midwest ! I feel it, flow is decent, it is a lil cluttered a lil from all the syllables like first dude said, just keep on with the bars repetition is the only way, keep it up. Also Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-3k-type-beat-victory-lap-@dblkmusic1-462146/

 

[DreadMillz]

U got a nice heavy voice and a respectable flow I like it pretty dope freestyle. check me out right here https://soundcloud.com/dreadmillz/dreadmillz-new-york-summer