One Stop Hip Hop New member Dec 4, 2013 #1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fa12kcuwpJQ&feature=youtu.be let me know if u like it, drop links and I got you
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fa12kcuwpJQ&feature=youtu.be let me know if u like it, drop links and I got you
Stanzah New member Dec 4, 2013 #2 Not bad, First thing i noticed was that Kansas city line, had way too many syllables crammed in. This happens in some of your other lines and it makes your bars sound more like spoken word rather than flow. Hope this makes sense, Keep at it. Return it: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eceive-feedback/$wv-feedback-returned-461990/
Not bad, First thing i noticed was that Kansas city line, had way too many syllables crammed in. This happens in some of your other lines and it makes your bars sound more like spoken word rather than flow. Hope this makes sense, Keep at it. Return it: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eceive-feedback/$wv-feedback-returned-461990/
Donta Black Active member Dec 4, 2013 #4 Reppin for the midwest ! I feel it, flow is decent, it is a lil cluttered a lil from all the syllables like first dude said, just keep on with the bars repetition is the only way, keep it up. Also Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-3k-type-beat-victory-lap-@dblkmusic1-462146/
Reppin for the midwest ! I feel it, flow is decent, it is a lil cluttered a lil from all the syllables like first dude said, just keep on with the bars repetition is the only way, keep it up. Also Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-3k-type-beat-victory-lap-@dblkmusic1-462146/
DreadMillz New member Dec 5, 2013 #5 U got a nice heavy voice and a respectable flow I like it pretty dope freestyle. check me out right here https://soundcloud.com/dreadmillz/dreadmillz-new-york-summer
U got a nice heavy voice and a respectable flow I like it pretty dope freestyle. check me out right here https://soundcloud.com/dreadmillz/dreadmillz-new-york-summer