Wave Rider *F4F*

Yo, intro is cool. I think you can use a better sub sound than that one. It sounds like an old one I used to use on FL back in the day, ha. Sylenth1 has some good sub sounds via presets that you can DL/Buy. I hear some off-key notes in the piano at :54 seconds and again at 1:06. I dont know if you wanted it to sound that way but it sounds like its off-key. The piano chords are cool and the melody is alright. Maybe find a way to make the piano a little busier and heavier (in terms of resonance). How old are you? Experience? DAW?

experimental beat by me: https://soundcloud.com/s-cruz/tank
 
S-Cruz said:
Yo, intro is cool. I think you can use a better sub sound than that one. It sounds like an old one I used to use on FL back in the day, ha. Sylenth1 has some good sub sounds via presets that you can DL/Buy. I hear some off-key notes in the piano at :54 seconds and again at 1:06. I dont know if you wanted it to sound that way but it sounds like its off-key. The piano chords are cool and the melody is alright. Maybe find a way to make the piano a little busier and heavier (in terms of resonance). How old are you? Experience? DAW?

experimental beat by me: https://soundcloud.com/s-cruz/tank
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Thanks bro. Ill check out the off key notes, and ill see what i can do with the bass but i like the authentic sound it has now, its kinda what i was going for.
And i just turned 20, ive been doing this for about 4 years, and i use fl studio.
 
Wow the intro wasn't that good but when the beat dropped it gives a really good vibe
 
Nice groove you got going on with this. Felt there should have been a break or a hook or more variety as it gets kind of boring. Maybe a swithc-up of the melody. Nicely-placed pauses there. Overall a solid beat! Not really diggin' the synth intro or the synth break at the end. Maybe the texture of it doesn't really mesh well with the rest of your beat but that's just me.

Give back some love when you can!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...[f4f]-drake-ambient-beat-464795/#post49734144
 
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