Lovely keys on the intro mate, crystal. There's a cool sinister edge to the melody. iIf this is a beat for spittin' over then it would work,no doubt, but as an instrumental it would need some layering. Keep it up.
I think the vocal chops need a bit of reverb on them and bringing down a little in the mix. The 808's sit nicely and I like the sparse hats. I think when a rapper laces it though it will all come together.
Like the hat patterns. Its simple, but effective. Like those scream wows. That melody in the 2nd part and the break are nice. I think some dark lyrics could go on this. Nice work man!
enjoyed it bruh, only thing i would change i bring up chords progression a lil more, i could hear it but not quite like i wanted to.
overall its a good track.
Nice work. I agree, the screams are a little overdone here. But i like the bells. Id like to see some other melodic elements, maybe some more chopped vocals. Also the hihats seem pretty static - you could try reducing the velocity of every other hihat, and add an autopan to give some spatial presence. Keep up the great work!
Nice start! I don't know too much of Travis Scott - listening now to him tho - but one thought: seems like the kick is getting distorted? Is that intentional? That aside, keep it up!!
you had the wows (box) come in in the beginning and they didn't fit to me... then you took them in the 2nd half of the intro which was odd but then you brought them back in when the song dropped.. i would take the vow's off the intro and leave them for when the song drops.. . the beat is dope though..has that dark vibe with the trap drums .. But anyway come check out my beatmaking video and beat > https://www.futureproducers.com/for...feedback-drop-your-links-469219/#post49756299 .. i've produced for soulja boy and honey cocaine among others and be sure to follow me on twitterhttps://www.twitter.com/cocaineaudio