Time travel

Your piece seems a little bit weak for its style; you have mainly a bassline, drums, some strings, and a few sound effects. This brings a slightly thin narrative and forces you to use echo effects and temporary sound effects to keep listeners engaged. This leads to a rather boring piece under the surface and might drive potential listeners away.

I'd suggest adding some more instruments, more melodies, and some counterpoint alongside variation in some places to allow yourself to put less pressure on the sound effects and keep listeners more engaged.
 
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