I really dig this track, it's got a lot of feels to it. I also love the sound design of the wind instruments as well as the melody.
The only little thing I'd change is the way you introduced the flute at 1:09, I felt it's a tad bit too loud and unexpected. But that's just me. Other than that, it's all really well done. Overall, a really good track, keep it up and best of luck with your future productions
The bottom end does overpower the higher end, so I might add something like a Soundgoodizer or EQ the track so the higher end has a chance to shine. One other thing I would change in the song is that I felt the drums were too synthetic. Switching them out for a more organic drum set could improve the experience.
Overall, I enjoyed your work. Keep it up!