They Wanna Get U (Addictions) FEED 4 M'fN FEED Like AlWAYS

I like the 90s feel of this beat, but I think the vocals were not convincing with the raspy character vocals and the flow on the rapping could be a bit better goes off a lil, but that comes with repetition, keep at it.
 
Sound like i know what your trying to do, but its not quite there. For the singing try this: Try doing one take for the melody, then layer it with another take where you whisper the vocals. As ridiculous as it may sound i think this might work better. Right now your sounding somewhere in between those two takes.

Rapping is fine though.
Keep at it.
 
Nice funk, rapping is also good. I just don't like the chorus where you "speak", but thats a matter of taste i think.
the rest sounds nice!
keep it up!
 
I like this track. It put a smile on my face. Vocal quality of great. Only thing I will mention is some points the vocals went out of timing hear and there but other than that great track. Very ambitious
 
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