I love the melody man! Snare is really nice. the high notes on the main synth are a bit piercing. it would have been cool to have a sweep with the breakdown to make that drop sound a little more powerful. Good musical changes to keep it interesting. This is actually beautifl to me man really great job! check me out! https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-about-addictionf4f-always-returned-476615/4/
I to like the song overall. Just needs some crispiness to it. As it's somewhat blurry I would think you could fix it in the mix. Try to lover some of the elements that is not crusial for the flow, point out the bass and higher the percussions. Make the soundpicture more vivid, fluid. Like equalizing it if you know what I mean <3
Pretty cool song. Good job overall. My main criticism is with your mix. Some of your sounds are blurring together. Some EQ work and maybe some panning would be good to help give each sound its own space if you know what I mean. Keep it up!
This is cool, some different sounding stuff. The snare you've got on here is really sick in the parts where it's turned up. No real criticism, keep it up!