Super Smooth RnB Track with Room for Rhymes - All FB Returned!

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Yea I really think the violin makes it that much better. And the orchestra is perfect. I'm new to producing so my feedback may not be the best.
 
That violin sounds cool with just the epiano and that synth that comes in. When the other strings come in sounds cluttered to me. Like the bridge and the outro as well. Typing as I listen; It's not the outro more like after the bridge when it's just the ep and the synth.
 
Sounds good man, it has good composition with the melodies that coexist and support one another. But the drums and percs could be brought out, as well as the violin that is in there. Stereo imaging would really help the track seem at the least less cluttered as K_City stated. Other than that its an awesome track, some tweaking and it could sound a lot better. Hope that my feedback helps. If you get time check out my youtube, I'm starting to upload more vids.
 
This is a great composition and it could be very, very epic. However the mix is holding it back. The drums could be much more present...possibly a more organic vibe. This reminds me of something that could be in a film. It seems very dry, it could be very powerful and exciting but the mix is just not what it could be. I have faith that you will make this a banger.

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I like this a lot. I sort of got an Aphex Twin vibe from it actually, with violins over it. In the beginning I would have liked to hear the violin stand out a bit more, but as the song goes on the violin comes more to the front so I suppose it could work like it is. I agree with what was said about maybe panning some of it to either side.
 
i like how u put the basssline, gave it a nice punchy feel kinda, try eq'n them drums to bring them forward because theres already alot goin on the track (in a good way) , keep it up, good job!!
 
verry smooth and dope i like the choice of instruments keep doing ur thing
 
Sounds great, definitely has potential! Just spread out that violin more, let the other sounds go through. But yeah, goo
 
I wonder if everyone creating rnb beats think the same cause im always tented add a possible melody to it as well :) overall I thought it was good but felt like it was something.. Bringing te drums forward like everyone has said might do the trick? :) liked the strings that came in at .57 as well :)
 
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the compositions are real cool, the beat has potential but as many have said the drums need to be brought out more and PUMP.
 
- I like the drums -- (the effects that you put on it)
- I don't really see an R&B artist on this though
- The violins are seem like a bit too much -- it felt kinda hard to get a feel for the beat -- bit too complex in my opinion
- The instruments are too loud -- lower them and bring the drums out more
- I would maybe add a tom roll for transition or something

I think you have potential for this track -- something for like Usher on his new album or something -- but you gotta fix the cluster in the beat!

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