Yo, sorry for the late response.
I didnt like the intro, but I like this verse a lot. The bass is cool but I cant really hear the bass drum. Possible overcompression of the master channel? I like those snare rolls. I like how you put in that vocal sample for the hook, it was different but actually worked. When the verse comes back after the first hook, it sounds even better the second time around. The rapper is doing his thing too, no complaints about him. This is a really cool track, just needs to be mixed better.