So Me (Swag Track)/ F4F/ First Master

[NinjaBeats]

Hey guys first track I mastered and mixed. Also threw in a bassline to punish the speakers.

https://soundcloud.com/ryanlifeproductions/so-me

peace

 

[waalex]

the bass synth is cool but i think you could select a melody that fits the sample better as the bassline seems a bit off at times. the mix is nice and clear but the bass could be tightened up a bit and the hi-hats are a lil tinny. otherwise it's well mixed and the sampling and drum patterns work well.

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/my-new-beat-sea-feedback-returned-all-time-459299/

 

[plotwist90]

I like the sound of the vocal samples, but I don't think it's composed very well. Make it flow better. The drums are mixed WAYYY too quietly and are in dire need of some eq and warming. I'm also not a fan of the more twerk-ish synth on this track. It's less than the sum of it's parts. I see potential, but this isn't there yet. Also, the bass is in too low of a frequency to really bang. I hate to be so critical but it helps.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...on-bronson-type-beat-f4f-459311/#post49707472

 

[NinjaBeats]

Hey guys, I agree the sample seems like it could have a whole lot of potential. I´ve been trying out enough new instruments and melodies on tpo of it the past couple days that I could drop a mixtape with those. But I´ve had to revert the original "twerkish". I cleaned up the bassline, added some effects, chopped a few kicks hats and snares. I´ll master this in the next couple days. I agree the drums were hardly audible and the hats were weak sounding. Thanks for the feedback guys.