I think you need to work on the arangment on this track! The piano sounds a bit to mechanical I would say. Try and soften it up a bit. Also, It seems you used the same melody twice but with diffrent synths. I suggest you try and mix up the track with diffrent elements at the same time!
eyoooo I like the combination of the "classical" piano sound and the modern synth sound. The thing is that it really sounds like it was programmed in max.10min. 2 layers and that's it, i know that you shouldn't rate a track after it's number of layers but in this case your "track" is more like a starting point where you should build a lot more sounds around it. There's nothing that really stands out and it's hard to imagine where and when people should listen to it. Just keep it up and keep learning until you can turn this into a banger.
Some feedback about my latest production would be really appreciated: Public Enemy Remix (electro House), looking for feedback