Shared Dreams - Imbalance

[MOBE.]

Hi guys.

I've released a 2nd track, the genre is electronic music.

I've used FL Studio to make it, every sound in it has been produced by myself.
I hope you like it but every kind of negative feedback or advice could be very useful to me!

The track is this one:



Thanks!

 

[56independent]

8/10
It's an intresting piece with a clear mood, direction, and theme, but seems to have mixing issues. Parts of the track don't "shine" out enough and feel distant, as if they are singing from under a thin layer of water, which does not work here that well. See 1:06, where the main track is submerged and drowning in reverb.

I suggest reducing some echoes and using some light panning to your advantage to help bring out the elements.