Rnb Instrumental (Unmastered) What should i add or change?

[RealAshone]

Okay so i'm real new to producing and i've been working on this beat which i would like you to inform me what i can do to make it better and what needs adding or removing, so i can finally get the beat finished and what not.

What i'm ideally looking for is some more advanced feedback from what i know so i can make the beat into something that sounds relaxing and nice, So yeah i would really appreciate any thoughts and opinions please.

I understand it's not mastered and the levels are probably all over the place but whatever you think needs changing just let me know and i will see what i can do


Track is uploaded as private just so i can get your guys feedback on the song.

 

[sketchzr]

Nice for a first production, really good. I actually think the production sounds good at this point and I like the change-ups in the drums/perc. I think there needs to be one or two new elements introduced into the mix as the rhodes get's a tad repetitive, either that or some changes in the melody, maybe adding some licks to keep it interesting. Also a kind of soft bassline would sound really great and compliment the mellow nature of the track

If you get the time let me know what you think of my track:

https://soundcloud.com/materialwonders/pristine-radio

Thanks!

 

[RealAshone]

Nice for a first production, really good. I actually think the production sounds good at this point and I like the change-ups in the drums/perc. I think there needs to be one or two new elements introduced into the mix as the rhodes get's a tad repetitive, either that or some changes in the melody, maybe adding some licks to keep it interesting. Also a kind of soft bassline would sound really great and compliment the mellow nature of the track

If you get the time let me know what you think of my track:

https://soundcloud.com/materialwonders/pristine-radio

Thanks!

Thanks for your input dude, will check you out shortly!

 

[RealAshone]

Anybody got any thoughts?