SBxTRE
New member
Good evening Future Producers! I recently bought a mic to start working on recording. This was recorded on Monday and the beat was made by my friend, Combeze.
https://soundcloud.com/unitedtrackteam/dacc-club-day-verse
I would really appreciate honest criticism on; Voice, Recording Mix, and Lyrics.
Verse:
The 4 Elements of Hip Hop Nature/
From Fire to Earth, Wind into Water/
The love of my life, I call it my Daughter/
I don't have a wife, cause I already got Her/
I love Hip Hop, I love her to Death/
I found out when she took a pregnancy Test/
But now shes got like, three other Dudes/
Graffiti, DJs and B-Boys Too/
I'm just the EM Cee, named Eric Liu/
My stagename's SB, so nice to meet You/
Now back to Hip Hop, and she's got some Problems/
You might look at her, and consider her Violent/
But no she not, She's real Nice/
You might think shes selfish with a real high Price/
But consider this, that she was born in Poverty/
Born and raised just to be a part of you and Me/
Thank you, and have a Great Weekend!
https://soundcloud.com/unitedtrackteam/dacc-club-day-verse
I would really appreciate honest criticism on; Voice, Recording Mix, and Lyrics.
Verse:
The 4 Elements of Hip Hop Nature/
From Fire to Earth, Wind into Water/
The love of my life, I call it my Daughter/
I don't have a wife, cause I already got Her/
I love Hip Hop, I love her to Death/
I found out when she took a pregnancy Test/
But now shes got like, three other Dudes/
Graffiti, DJs and B-Boys Too/
I'm just the EM Cee, named Eric Liu/
My stagename's SB, so nice to meet You/
Now back to Hip Hop, and she's got some Problems/
You might look at her, and consider her Violent/
But no she not, She's real Nice/
You might think shes selfish with a real high Price/
But consider this, that she was born in Poverty/
Born and raised just to be a part of you and Me/
Thank you, and have a Great Weekend!
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