Requesting feedback for Beat: Space Dice Wasted

[Homey Pimpson]

What's up guys?

I've been a member for a while now, but haven't been active on the forum or with beats lately. I want to pick it up again, and would like feedback on a beat I made a while ago. Thanks in advance, looking forward to learn a lot from you guys and this forum.

https://soundcloud.com/homey-pimpson/space-dice-wasted

Peace!

 

[YWM]

just had a listen to the track. i think the delayed snares are a lil bit too much for me personally. i dig the vibe of the beat tho. its real nice. i would probably just suggest adding more sounds to the hook to make more distinct from the verse. other than tht great job n this man and keep it up !

appreciate it if you could feed me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eedback/new-schoolboy-q-type-beat-f4f-473479/

 

[Keez2040]

Yo man returning feedback. The beat is decent. I would just say add a melody in there like a synth, or better yet a piano. I don't know if you have ever heard of him but I could see dom kennedy going on a beat like this. Keep grinding.


https://www.futureproducers.com/for...new-beat-looking-honest-criticism-f4f-473583/


https://soundcloud.com/flip-keez