rate my lyrics, please. I’m a complete beginner, 13, so any feedback helps.

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North Star

I still remember our love, back before I ruined all of the fun, yeah.
Oh, and I know it’s too late to reverse it, trapped in a whirlpool, I’m hopeless.
But, I still need you, I’ll do anything, yeah.
I’ll keep on following the North Star, although, in my heart, I know that I’ll never get far.
And, I know, chasing fables could never undo the damage I left, could never turn the tables.
But, does it ever really hurt to try?
No, it burns worse when you sit there and cry.
I’m not a tearful guy, yeah, no.
So, if my only hope’s a fireball light years away, it may seem impossible, but, I won’t let it slip away.
Yeah, I’ll keep following the North Star, praying to everything it’ll blast me out to the moon.
And, if I get there before our doom, I’ll write her a letter and send her a postcard of me standing happily over the vase I knocked over.
Yeah, I’ll be towering over our old roller coaster, knowing I paved all the boulders.
I may only succeed in this fairytale of mine, but if so, I’d rather believe this mess could unwind.
 
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