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ADAndrea91

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This is the beat I was listening too.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yyo9HcV-AsU

One of these days I'll be making more money than
Everyone you know don't laugh it aint funny been
living life wrong that was than
Now I'm killing it
Changed my mindset
left behind all the negatives
Now I'm living life with this now I write
Rhymes just to feel good like I'm doing something right
Girl you aint shit to me like a pawn to a knight
See me flying overheads like a pair of Nike Flights and
I just want to let you know
That life is pretty ****ed up
Things will always come and go
But don't you ever give up
Learn to go with the flow
Kind of like a pick n roll
Take it down to the hole, now your gonna score
Money is my mindset, I want a million
Yah i have a list of demands I'm a villain
Tripping in the back room, dripping from the ceiling
I do it like a Wutang song for the children

I know the structure is all off but this is what i came up trying to fit within the song up to where i believe the hook would come in.
 
DataDay said:
I think it flows well to the beat. Are you going to finish writing?
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i finished writing another verse and even recorded it. This is my first time recording and even rapping in general, I don't have any equipment so I had to do it over my phone. Could i get your email and send it for some feedback?
 
How come you only posted an instrumental? We did not hear you rap over the beat? Are you afraid of something? We don't know what you are talking about. Rap over the beat so we can hear how you sound!
 
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