Rap #3: Truth "PLEASE REVIEW! I'M SERIOUS ABOUT A RAP CAREER"

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I'd honestly really appreciate some feedback in the comments guys. I'm getting pretty serious about rap, so thanks!

Look at me, I am the key,
Screw you and your ecstasy,
I went to school,
Didn't mess around and now guess who's the fool,
All that stuff put in my head was suddenly just torn to shreds,
You bullied me,
Thought you were the bigger man now on the streets,
All those family issues and troubles led back right up to you,
What did you do,
Troubled little man was selling dope 'til two,
Damn,
Think it through,
Is it worth getting arrested just to have your limits tested 'cause you heard your none to mess with,
It ain't right, If you want to fight,
Fly right to the light,
With that last line on verse, I guess that this is goodnight.
 
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