Project 2 - Looking for some input (HOT/NOT)

[Flip G]

skim thru, send me some input...
I'm crowd sourcing A&R lol... don't worry about being too harsh... I use it as fuel for each project : )

I made all the beats and raps... looking for some honest critiques of both.

I'm having fun but I wanna be as good as I can, thanks in advance

 

[audio child]

Just got paid beat is hard!! Just turn the strings down when the brass is playing because its too overpowering! Nice mix on shake iike that!

 

[Abdul _Barrz]

skim thru, send me some input...
I'm crowd sourcing A&R lol... don't worry about being too harsh... I use it as fuel for each project : )

I made all the beats and raps... looking for some honest critiques of both.

I'm having fun but I wanna be as good as I can, thanks in advance

your song writing is tight i enjoy all your music, making it commercial may be the growing part for you. im an artist too so i cant tell you what to do i just know good music when i here it. keep creating, experimenting with new sounds youll hit the mark sooner or later. mean while fam you settin the lab on fire keep going.