Pay me if you want some magic.

Whatever makes you feel better MR.I got Suicidal when i use drugs.

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you're the cocky bastard in the dojo braggin'
then i transition from elbow blows to choke holds laughin,
to cripple this bozo faggot and his so-so rappin.
krillan the reptilian cousin to Komodo dragons,
thirsting for hemoglobin to keep me goin with this home grown passion,
i was ripping rappin victims since my catechism,
so call your daughter and tell her that her dad is missin,
my seemingly senseless murders are all part of a master vision,
lyrically task efficient, distorting the earth with cataclysms,
you can't hold your ground in these rap Olympics,
turning u into a coma victim, disrupting your inner solar system,
your new Chakra alignment jeopardizes ur soul's existence,
my subconscious tells me everything is possible, while you're told it isn't,
my thought process offsets this contest because yours is so simplistic,
turn on and off your brain office, making impulses travel backwards through synapses
and you'll hallucinate moshpits in Auschwitz under shower faucets,
you wanted to lock horns now experience a god's scorn,
talking shit on a collision course and couldn't hear the fog horns,
your fault.. i warned you.. superstitions cause you to pour salt,
invite you in with a shotgun tied to the doorknob with the cord taut.
blaow... morgue shot. the best picture you've never taken,
and your mother's convinced now, there's no god to rest her faith in,
however satan, is still present in her eyes causing agony,
my good intentions match the outcome of the Crusaders and Maccabees,
close to the edge haphazardly, as i pick appart every fallacy,
until he falls into the cavity, and believe me daug the chasm's deep.


seriously.... who ever let that faggot speak?!



suck it slowly
 
"turn on and off your brain office, making impulses travel backwards through synapses
and you'll hallucinate moshpits in Auschwitz under shower faucets,"

"your fault.. i warned you.. superstitions cause you to pour salt,
invite you in with a shotgun tied to the doorknob with the cord taut."


Hahaha damn that was dope. You got bars.
 
I believe it's a good thing in hip hop to be cocky. I can't really see a great hip hop song being written by some nervous low self esteem person. As far as whether this guy sucks or not, it's hard to say. There's so much more to rapping than written words. You're flow and delivery is vital. He'd have to put up an actual audio clip for us to accurately judge whether he can write good rap. I, myself, have a hard time finding a good way to implement the first half of his rap so that it stays rhythmic, but maybe he has a way of making it sound great. As it stands, we can't really judge his rapping skills.

To the OP, you never mentioned your prices. I'm curious as to how much you are charging for your services. I'm also curious as to why you get defensive about being accused of being white... one of the greatest rap lyricists of all time is white.
 
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So is Eminem, and he started dissing everyone. Maybe Dj Omni Insta is one of the greatest rap lyricists of all time? -_-

I can certainly understand where Rapper's Friend is coming from, but crowning yourself as king without earning such a title will lead you to a handful of haters. If you want to crown yourself because you earn it, then lets see some of the stripes you've earned. Graffiti-wise anyone who would claim to be "kings" without earning a title are looked down upon. Just my piece of advice, but if this is what pushes you to be better, by all means continue. With caution of course.
 
it's not that bad.. some people just hate for the sake of hating.. or to feel better about themselves.... but you are cocky than a mother****er tho lol
 
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