Dig the overall feel/sample, I think the drums need to hit harder and have a lot deeper sound the snare feels way too slappy with not enough punch and the bass drum could use some punch as well. Overall I like it though man its unique.
Like the dude above me said. Kick and snare need to be punchier. Definitely an interesting beat though. I like how the distortion on the guitar kicks in throughout the track.
Not a bad idea at all, I thought the Kick and the snare need to pop out of the mix, I also thought that the beat could of been abit shorter, although I know people sometimes structure there beats so that singers/rappers can jump on and I get that.